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How to Choose a Bicycle?

Some people like tricks, some like races, and some like speed control. You should buy your prefered bike. Rules for choose bike:
1. Learn how to ride if you don't already know. That's the first and most important step.
2. Learn about the basic types of bikes. Here are a few examples, with a brief description of each.
Road bikes. This is a general term for traditional bicycles designed for good performance on pavement. There is a wide range of choices within this category; often they can be classified into the two broad groups of racing/performance or touring.
Mountain bikes. Bikes designed for off-road use, with compact frames, stable handling, clearance for wide and knobby tires, and higher handlebars for a more upright position.
3. Choose Many mountain bikes have at least a front suspension, to improve comfort and steering control on rough surfaces. Beginners may find mountain bike handlebars and controls easier to use.
4. If you don't intend to ride on unpaved trails, a road bike will be more efficient. But the racing style bikes will not be very comfortable or practical for casual or practical.
5. Road and mountain bikes usually have gears and shifters, usually operated by some kind of trigger. They are very useful for most riders, especially in hilly terrain, or for high performance. They let you adjust your pedaling effort to account for hills, wind, or your own fatigue.
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@hsnbykkls

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@Gökhan Toros
Çok teşekkür ederim Gökhan abi üşenmeden uğraştığın için

Baş taraflarda biraz sana ait kısımlar var diğerleri sanki başka yerlerden copy/paste yapılmış gibi duruyor. Öğretmeninde böyle düşünür mü bilemem. Bazı değişikliklikler yaptım istersen kullanabilirsin.

Some people like tricks, some like races and some like speed control. You can buy your desired bike. Here are the basic steps of selection of correct bike:
1. Learn how to ride if you don't know. That's the first and most important step.
2. Learn about the basic types of bikes. Here are the examples with a brief description of each one.
Road bikes. This is a general expression for traditional bicycles designed for good performance on paved roads such as asphalts. If you like this kind of bikes, you have lots of chances during selection. They are classified into the two broad groups, racing/performance and touring.
Mountain bikes. These are the bikes designed for off-road cycling, with compact frames, stable handling, clearance for wide and knobby tires, and higher handlebars for a more upright position.
3. If your preference is for mountain bikes, choose bike has at least a front suspension which improve comfort and steering control on rough surfaces. Beginners may find mountain bike handlebars and controls easier to use.
4. If you don't intend to ride on unpaved trails, a road bike will be more efficient. But the racing style bikes will not be very comfortable or practical for casual or practical.
5. Road and mountain bikes usually have gears and shifters, usually operated by some kind of trigger. They are very useful for most riders, especially in hilly terrain or for high performance. They let you adjust your pedaling effort to account for hills, wind or your own fatigue.

@ONUR ÖZTÜRK
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